Friday, March 15, 2013

Thesis Statement




Thesis Statement

One of the most feared leaders in medival times. He conquerd many lands and killed many people. Attila the hun reign for over 20 years bringing the Hunic tribe to great power.

3 comments:

  1. Obviously it is about Atilla the HUn which is good.
    It seems like everything you wrote is fact though so I am not sure what you are going to try to prove in your paper. I don't know.
    Your words are all good.

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  2. Everything looks good i believe that you need to correct your spelling
    Medival-Medieval
    Conquerd-Conquered

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